Life teaches me in Five days what all can happen.
starts from simple chat continues to friendship almost lover and breaks up in just five days of chatting.
Too much happen will be told in a short story.
First Chapter
How I meet priya?
I was planning to write something and planning to tell those stories to the world. Suddenly one day in my facebook the writing group which I had joined for two months had interesting topics like who wants to publish his or her book novels for free and get paid for it. I sent my whats app number at night. I got an email and message in my whatsapp that I can be part of one million people who have joined the group.it was kangfu book someone by the name of summit request me to download the app and instal it. If i get something which i don't know i can ask her for the help.
Then she added me in the main group of apps, I saw around more than 20 countries people in the group mostly from African continent.
I joined the main group and sent a hello message to everyone and I got good welcome messages back as new joiners.
I almost chat fifteen minutes then suddenly i remembered that i am here to get benefit of this also such i had three unfinished novels written but the big and important part was lift which was editing of my novels i asked for the help"anyone can help me out in edit part" i got three to four messages that how much is it?
I told chapter wise about not more than 5 pages 3000 words only. I got a message from three to four girls. Interested, wish to help you in the edit part and the other message was yes i can in my private messages not in group. I start chatting with them, introducing myself to them , and I send my mian documents to all these three people: one man and two girls. And I wait until night to get back those chapters which I sent to those friends. Finally i got good advice and messages from those guys one of them motivated me and advice me like.
" I like your story. However, you need to improve on a few things
1. Write short meaningful sentences.
2. Avoid the excessive use of commas instead of full stop.
3. Use quotation marks " " to denote direct speech.
4. You can use an online tool called Grammarly to correct your English
Lastly, keep up the good work and Goodluck "
I thanks him for his hard work which he has done for me, motivated me to write more and more.
I got a second message from kritika from India she also motivated me and said " You know Asif I really love your story, but the time all small things will be ok and perfect, I can tell you most of our Indians writers writes cant even write a simple perfect sentences and they have many books published and your far better then them.'' Keep your motivation high and keep writing the result will tell you all.
I thank her for her kind help.
I tried to chat with her and asked a few things about writing and English language, Which she was very good at.
I asked her for an introduction about herself first.
My name is Priya "Kitto", I am from New delhi India and I am 18 years old and Currently studying at my college and also working in a private hospital as a nurse.
And you Asif?
Oh! Great
This is Asif from Kabul Afghanistan. I have a Post Graduation degree from India in 2018 social science and I am an army officer in my country working in the Ministry of Defense Kabul, and I am 23 years old.
Oh! Great she replied officer
Thanks priya , I replied.